It's hard to believe that this is you doing these drawings. It seems like yesterday that you were struggling with drawing simple things.
Here's my thoughts: On the first guy, I think it could've been a good idea to scale up the head size a bit. Also, from a cartooning perspective, the hands could be simplified. There's no need to include details of the knuckles and joints unless you're going for a exaggeration effect i.e. Ren and Stimpy style. Here, he's just waving. The crocs were a nice touch. Maybe his feet could've been bigger or way smaller. Remember, in cartoons, the object is to make something funny. Love the eyes and the haircut.
At first, I was confused with the girl's body. She's shaking hands with the dog right? That's kind of what it looks like. Kind of. I think it's the bend of the waist that confuses me, looks awkward.
Another thing is the dog's lack of neck/chin. it almost looks like the tongue is coming out of its neck. Where's the collar on that dog?!
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It's hard to believe that this is you doing these drawings. It seems like yesterday that you were struggling with drawing simple things.
Here's my thoughts:
On the first guy, I think it could've been a good idea to scale up the head size a bit. Also, from a cartooning perspective, the hands could be simplified. There's no need to include details of the knuckles and joints unless you're going for a exaggeration effect i.e. Ren and Stimpy style. Here, he's just waving. The crocs were a nice touch. Maybe his feet could've been bigger or way smaller. Remember, in cartoons, the object is to make something funny. Love the eyes and the haircut.
Oh, I see. Two different posts.
The next drawing is good too.
At first, I was confused with the girl's body. She's shaking hands with the dog right? That's kind of what it looks like. Kind of. I think it's the bend of the waist that confuses me, looks awkward.
Another thing is the dog's lack of neck/chin. it almost looks like the tongue is coming out of its neck. Where's the collar on that dog?!
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